Final Cut Revised

https://youtu.be/g42HfoSD2xU

The things I revised were trimming the shot of the blurry phone to make it not as long, and I added fade transitions to different scenes. I also inserted a fade edit to the music to make the scenes flow together easier.

Peer review

 Due to the reviews I got I had to lower my music volume because it was kind of loud, and i did notice that, I also had to fade in the music in the beginning because it just comes to a dramatic end, I then had to apply a cross fade between shots and give less time on the blurry phone.

First Final Cut

 https://youtu.be/geAsA3xO6is

This is my first draft of my final cut.